Saturday, November 29, 2014

Book Review: Darkfever by Karen Marie Moning


Darkfever by Karen Marie Moning
Dell © 2010
Paperback
Urban Fiction
Reviewed by Leah
Darkfever on Amazon

Thanks to a litchick's GRs updates while rereading this, I found myself anxious to delve into this series and see what she was raving about.  Well, the one time a year I go to Barnes&Noble (none close to my house, unfortunately) in search of two other books, I end up walking out with the entire Fever series instead.  And I BETTER love every single one of them! *squinty glare for the woman who knows what I'm talking about*


Summary:

MacKayla Lane is a true Georgia Peach.  She loves warmth and sunshine, bright colors, fashion, and music.  And it is as she is enjoying all of the above that she gets a phone call that causes her world to come crashing down.

Her sister, Alina, has been mutilated and murdered in an abandoned alley in Dublin, Ireland.  Studying overseas at Trinity College had been Alina's dream come true.  Now that decision was Mac's worst nightmare.

When the case hits a freezing chill due to lack of leads, a desperate Mac takes her new cell phone and books a one-way ticket.  Her mission?  Reopen her sister's case with the hauntingly chilling message Alina left on her voicemail the day of her death.

Dublin has more in store for Mac than she realized, however.  All too soon, she is drowning in a world where the Fae are real, and far more deadly than she could ever have believed.  Gifted as a sidhe-seer, Mac is capable of finding the truth behind the glamours thrown by most Fae.  And it freaks her out.

A chance encounter with Jericho Barrons staples them at the hips before she's able to detract herself from the situation.  All too soon, Mac is forced to realize that her hunt for her sister's killer has dropped her into a world that she can no longer escape.  And she desperately wants to.


Initial Thoughts:

The opening paragraph was as intriguing as all those editors tell you yours must be.  It grasped my attention right away and I could hear this very cynical voice narrate the prologue in such a way as to make me think that my journey with Mac would not be a disappointing one.

While my care for the narration somewhat lessened, I found that the adventure which followed the prologue was not one I was willing to detach from for much longer than an hour or two.  In my opinion: a good read.


Characters:


MacKayla "Mac" Lane is a lovely southern belle with beautiful blonde hair, gorgeous green eyes, and the fashion sense to show it all off in a way that drops every male mouth in the vicinity.  With an eye for detail and a penchant for describing her clothes at any given opportunity, she was easily getting on my nerves.

We are nothing alike.

Obsessed with her appearance at almost any given moment, it was hard not to want to reach through the book and shake her a little bit.  All the while yelling, "Focus!  FOCUS!" in her ears.

There was also the fact that she felt strangely sympathetic towards a gang of men intent on killing her--with the added bonus of possible torture and/or rape prior to that event--when something far more menacing takes them off her hands.  To me, it's strange that she actually wonders if they had families and whether or not someone would be missing them.  And then to be angry at Jericho for doing the only thing he could to ensure their survival…  That was too bloody much for me.

She's a pink tornado of emotions and sunshine and angst that did not sit well with me for a lot of this book.  And her lack of swearing appropriately made me just want to wave the book in the author's face and say, "Really?  She works in a bar but she couldn't pick up how to properly swear?  Yeah, because that's totally believable."

Yet, Mac has a few redeemable qualities.  Like her bloodthirsty desire for vengeance on her sister's killer.  Or her stubborn streak that allows for her to stand her ground (even when she shouldn't, in some cases).  And then that inquisitive streak that probably gets her in more trouble than it's worth, but allows the story to proceed at a great pace.


Jericho Barrons is an alpha male in a way that makes all other pretend alphas shrink against a wall and piss themselves.  This man is cruel, abusive, cunning, and selfish.  He has no regards for another's feelings.  If someone can be used to suit his purposes, he will be the first to throw them into a dangerous situation.  And if stalking you is something he feels he needs to do, he won't hesitate to do so.  No man is more self-confident, arrogant, or unapologetic than Jericho Barrons.

And I loved him for it.  I loved that he was an unapologetic asshole with his own agenda.  The man is on a mission and why the fuck should he care about anyone else?  Particularly if they're a threat to his goals?  The fact that he physically assaults Mac doesn't make me cringe or cry out with outrage.  (Possibly because I'm more on the violent side than not, and I understand that he did all of this to scare her so much that she would run for her life.  Despite how it looked, he did it to save her.  It's just rather too bad that Mac didn't listen.)

I enjoy characters who have clear, defined goals and who allow nothing to stand in their way.  Evil or benign, I will always appreciate someone who does whatever it takes; no matter the cost.  If what they desire is that important, I don't care how they go about achieving that goal.  To do anything less would make them seem weak-willed and pathetic in my eyes.  So for Jericho to be a complete asshole … that was not a let-down.  And while my panties didn't drip the moment his name appeared on the page, I do have a deep admiration for him that is more like the respect of comrades rather than an urge to make him my sex slave.


Alina was the social butterfly who enjoys stuffy classrooms, peaches-and-cream candles, and Beautiful perfume.  All of that changed roughly four months after her arrival in Dublin, and nothing else seemed more important than the world she now found herself neck-deep into.  The world where the Fae walked around in fierce forms that no one else could see, and she had to find the Sinsar Dubh before they did or else the whole world would be swallowed into darkness.

Even though Alina is already dead from the very beginning, I feel like you get to know a lot about her just by what you experience through Mac.  Like her love of learning and the amount of ambition she had.  Her resourcefulness was remarkable, and her acting skills commendable since she tricked her whole family into thinking she was absolutely fine up until she no longer was.  Alina definitely seemed like the sister to take charge and get things done from the moment she realized there was an issue.  And that's why she's on this list: because I liked her as a person, even if the reader only sees her through memory.


V'lane makes any woman want to climb out of her clothes the moment she lays eyes on him.  Literally.  A Seelie Prince, V'lane has no desire to completely obliterate the human race, unlike his Unseelie counterparts.  Instead, the Seelie have a very specific and rewarding use for humans: sex.  And just being in the presence of V'lane can assure his success.  Except when it comes to Mac … barely.

This Fae…  Damn.  Just … DAMN!


Plot & Setting:


The setting here was Dublin, Ireland.  And I got no feel for it whatsoever.  Being a old world nut, I love stories set in Ireland.  Gaelic is one of those languages you could listen to forever and scenes of the Emerald Isle are alive and well in all forms of media.  But this book didn't add to them.

And I don't blame it for that.  When you're in a first person narrative, anything the character isn't likely to think isn't going to be put in print.  And your character definitely isn't going to think more than a few things about the architecture or atmosphere of certain places, and they're not going to describe the entire city in detail down to the last bit of cobblestone on the road.

I like when books are like that.  When they don't stretch the suspension of disbelief by throwing in a lot of details the character wouldn't normally notice.  And it gives me room to create the rest of the scene for myself, with all the furnishings I so desire.  Just as Mac said in the beginning of the book:

"Movies tell you what to think. A good book lets you choose a few thoughts for yourself."

This was a good book.  No info-dumping, intriguing lay out of the Fae society and history, and a general realness that doesn't derail into the land of unbelievable.

I'm not sure exactly how to explain the plot without giving away too many spoilers.  So I won't.  There's only one shift in the plot that Mac didn't count on: her responsibilities shifting from being her sister's avenger to the world's protector.  Only she is capable of sensing the lethal Dark Book, the Sinsar Dubh and that makes it her responsibility to find it before the Unseelie get their dangerous appendages on it.  It's a duty she did not sign up for and one she tries to delude herself into believing she can ignore it.  Even though her sister died for this.


Writing Style:


I felt like I was in Mac's head the entire time I was reading.  This book never read like it was someone throwing words on pages.  It was the reminiscences of a young woman who was naive and frightened in a foreign country where everyone she met seemed intent on killing her.  Not a single detail deviated from this image, meaning that the writing was spectacular because no amount of the author's own personality (that I could tell) dripped in to drown out Mac's.


Overall Opinion:

Though Mac and I are very dissimilar creatures, her voice had that dry type of narration that I find completely human.  And the adventure she's on is certainly intriguing enough to where I will continue reading the series with high hopes that maybe some of her obsession with fashion is toned down a bit more and a little badassery is stapled into her frail frame.

And I'm getting more of the perfectionist asshole that is Jericho Barrons.  Excuse me while I end this review and go back to reading...

Friday, November 21, 2014

Book Review: Ruby Red by Kerstin Gier


Ruby Red by Kerstin Gier
Henry Holt © 2011
Hardcover
Urban Fiction
Reviewed by Leah

In the beginning, I adored this book.  By the middle, it had settled into a more firm liking.  At the end, I slammed it shut and threw it.


Summary:


Gwyneth Shepherd thought the hereditary time-traveling would pass her by, since she wasn't born on the right day and her cousin Charlotte clearly was.  So it comes as quite the shock to everyone when Gwyneth takes a spinning dip in the past while Charlotte suffers only from phantom symptoms brought on by high expectations.

The only person the family has to blame is Grace, Gwyneth's mother.  Having lied to everyone these past sixteen years, it made it impossible for Gwyneth to be properly trained.  Now, she's got to stumble her way through a secret society--who still won't induct her into their mysteries, despite her being the Ruby--with an arrogant nineteen year old, Gideon de Villiers, who has had his time-traveling duties for two years now.

It's no surprise, therefore, when Gwyneth finds herself with a bit more than reservations about all of this.  Especially when she meets the creator of the society, the formidable Count Saint-Germain, sometime in the eighteenth century.  Her mother's warnings not to trust anyone are beginning to seem a lot more valid and the questions mount with each passing hour.

Even Gideon, who is becoming less arrogant and more considerate as their mission proceeds, is a lot more dangerous than he seems.  A fact Gwyneth really does not want to believe, since she's falling in love with him.


Initial Thoughts:


I loved Gwyneth's voice.  Her relationship with her best friend was real and energetic.  And the mystery surrounding the time-traveling gene was something to sink my teeth into.  The beginning of this had me really loving it, but about mid-way through I was beginning to see the flaws.  Once we hit that ending though…  *shaking my head*


Characters:


Gwyneth was a little immature, it's true.  Everything she knows about history typically comes from a film she and her friend Lesley watched.  And while the name dropping of films caught my attention at first, it eventually got to the point of redundancy.  She was also lacking in a serious backbone, but I can't say that much of it was unrealistic.  In the same situation, when it was supposed to be her cousin and not her, it would make sense the amount of fear and confusion that pervades her mind.  The biggest problem was that she did nothing to clear the confusion and she just accepted that no one was going to tell her anything.  That shit is not okay.  I'd have pitched a fit from here to high heaven before I decided to do as these people asked of me.  And when your mother is that adamant about you not meeting someone and won't say why in front of all these people, you can bet your ass that it is a BAD IDEA!  Gwyneth, on the other hand, ignores all such warnings and decides to go through all of this as if they really can protect her.  Moron.


Lesley would have been fun to see a lot more of.  She's about the only person with real common sense, even if she has a lot of quirks.  And her dedication to helping Gwyneth is shown in the thick file of research she does at her friend's bidding, in the hope to keep Gwyneth safe from the baddies.  Again, she's a bit immature, but I know that you never act more immature than when you're with your best friend.


Grace Shepherd…  I'm just going to quote a passage from Khanh's review of Witch Song to describe exactly what I think of this woman:

"Her mother has a condition that many mothers in literature suffer. It is called lol-i-ain't-telling-u-nothin-bitch-itis.

Lol-i-ain't-telling-u-nothin-bitch-itis: symptoms may include...

- not telling you daughter a single fucking thing about who she is despite the fact that the Big Terrible Secret might kill her

- keeping everything a secret like your life depends on it...oh wait, your life DOES depend on it

- ignorance is bliss: because if your daughter doesn't know that there are people out to kill her, it means she's totally fucking safe, right?!"

That, exactly, covers everything wrong with Grace's character.  She informs no one that her daughter has likely inherited the gene … in order to protect her.  Are you fucking serious?  There's no excuse for this shit and authors really need to stop doing this with parental figures.  I understand wanting to take the MC by surprise, but this could easily have been solved by people not factoring Daylight Savings Time and have Gwyneth actually born on the 8th of October.  Simple fix.  UGH!


Gideon de Villiers is an awful character.  He is not consistent in any way, and that irritates me more than anything in this entire book.  When he first meets Gwyneth, he's an arrogant, angry ass.  I understood that.  Because of Grace, the girl he's been training all this time with is now clearly not what they thought she was and now he has to deal with someone who will be playing catch-up through everything.  He has a right to be angry.  Gwyneth is unprepared and now the entire plan is altered.  That's fine to think Gwyneth is inadequate and unhelpful, because she is.  What is not okay is to drop the arrogant facade the moment they travel back in time and become nice to her all of a sudden.  And he stays that way.  Even after kissing her cousin on the cheek, sending Charlotte away beaming with happiness, and then turns around and acts all worried over Gwyneth's safety.  And (SPOILER) for him to up and declare that she's not just an "average" girl to him and that she's special in the end there, I wanted to punch him in the face.  I literally THREW THE BOOK when they kissed, because he hadn't acted the slightest bit interested the entire fucking novel, and now he's all but declaring himself to her.  What a little twatwaffle!


Lucy and Paul were the pair I really wanted to get to know.  In the prologue and the epilogue, they are the most endearing characters and I really enjoy Paul's tone of voice.  And the way he calls Lucy 'Princess' makes the reader think it's almost sarcastic, but that's just his voice and the context.  After a while, you realize that it really is a pet-name and denotes affection rather than sarcasm.  The fact that his voice was that easy to establish in my mind makes him my favorite character, hands down.


Plot & Setting:


Okay, the setting here was next to nothing.  But I understand that when you consider most of the focus was on the dialogue or the events, rather than where they took place.  However, when your premise is that your characters can travel back in time, I need some details.  Telling me what era it is and giving me the dress code does not bring that era to life.  Half the fun with time-travel is that it can take place in any time and your character gets to experience it all.  So give us an experience, would you?

Plot wise, this book missed the mark by a wide margin.  Why?  Because there wasn't a full arc at all.  We have the beginning and an initial event, but that is all.  Everything from there on out was rising action only.  And then the book ended abruptly with that stupid (SPOILER) declaration of specialness and a kiss.  This was not A book.  This was PART of a book.  Which just makes me all the angrier at authors and publishers who think this shit is okay.  It's not.  If it's a series, that's fine.  A trilogy is okay.  But ONLY if you have distinct books with their own plots that happen to fit into the main plot.  Come on people, the Harry Potter series should have taught you better by now.

As I said, this was all rising action.  This was about Gwyneth discovering she's been lied to and ends up being the gene-carrier.  It's about her having some very scary experiences in the past and having Gideon to comfort her.  It's about her using modern technology to try and figure out who she's dealing with.  And it's about her having a crush on--what appears to be--her cousin's boyfriend, only for the tables to turn and Gideon ends up (SPOILER) kissing her.  There is no climax (though there's a poor imitation of one), no resolution.  Nothing.


Writing Style:

Despite the issues contained within, this was a book I could not put down.  It was a beautifully polished piece containing little to no superfluous information and no editing errors that I am aware of.  Which is always worthy of a gold star.  And the writing flowed so well that I truly did not wish to put down this book.


Overall Opinion:

Hmm.  You wouldn't think, after reading this far, that I actually loved this book in the beginning.  I even still like it enough to buy the sequels and finish off the series.  Obviously, it has issues.  Lots of them.  But they were brought together in such a way that I still want to know what happens from here.

Odd, isn't it?  Since this sounds like such a negative review…  But I enjoyed Gwyneth as a narrator--though she wasn't the brightest bulb in the chandelier.  Gideon had his dashing moments that I liked, despite his personality disorder.  And Lesley…  C'mon.  It's Lesley.  She's pretty cool and served as comedic relief rather well, I thought.  I also completely understand why Grace is intent on keeping her secrets, so that was alright even.

My biggest issue was the instalove on Gideon's part.  (I can't say on Gwyneth's because at least the reader can see that she's attracted to Gideon.  And she doesn't get all mushy about him in a way that denotes love, so much as attraction.  Hers is a crush that could become more, but it's not to the point of love yet.  Gideon on the other hand…)  That is literally what made me throw the book.  Right up until the very end, I still liked the book well enough to gladly pick up the second two seconds after I was done reading (if I had it), but once I hit that end, it took me a minute to even read the epilogue.  Of course, I think it was Lucy and Paul's epilogue that saved this book from my 'burn it with the fire of a thousand suns' list.  *shrug*

Okay, I'm done.  Other stuff to do today and I can't think of any more comments about this book.  So go forth and read, people.  Whether this or another novel that takes your fancy.

Sunday, November 16, 2014

Writing Update: Edge of the Ravine

This isn't so much of an update as it is an advertisement.  I don't even know why.

For at least a year now, a story I have written under some of the strangest circumstances has been posted on a site known as MissLiterati.  It is a writing site typically geared towards tweens--though it says it is for teenagers, this is a load of crock as the censorship has taken such a dive that I no longer feel the need to visit the site.

That being said, my first published novel was written on this site and with that fan base I published that work.  (A mistake, really, but it got my feet wet and I made some fantastic friends, so I'm not complaining too much about my naiveté.)  Now, I have a piece of writing left there.  It is unedited and will likely never leave the site.  For some reason, however, I feel the need to share that with a broader audience today.  Again, I have no idea why.  But this is how I'm going about fulfilling that urge.  So enjoy my blatant advertisement.



Between the ravine and the train tracks I was throughly bound.  Forever destined to run three miles in either direction to find one or the other waiting to hold me back.  Keep me trapped.  In a shallow bowl, I was kept safe and secure.  With no one to hear my cries; no one to see the tears as they fell relentlessly down my face.

Until she came.

Until she became my everything.

Edge of the Ravine on MissLiterati

(Obviously, my username on ML is Vulpes.  And the cover picture came from this blog post, as far as I can tell.  Though it was created by my good friend, Forever.)